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Se debe cantar estilo skyrim, celta, vikingo


The boy that pierced the great blue sky
Is sitting next next to me
He's worried, wounded, very ill
What can i do for him?

He spills black poison from his eyes
How come he's still alive?
The clouds are raging over us
The birds all went to hide

Oh my, oh my, what could i do?
He's cursed, and can not die
He wispers like he's very old
To me is barely a child

The thunder roars, the storm starts
He's warm, he shivers, he's sick
I'll chant a song my mother told
Untill he falls asleep





Nose como seguirla, alguna ortografía que arreglar? Se puede robar? Si pero con amor

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Necesito feedback ya se q está medianamente buena pero nose la ortografía (la puntuación me la chupa un poco)

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Algún músico qué haga un tema y lo suba a yusube

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The boy that pierced the great blue sky
Is sitting down beside to me
He's worried, wounded, very ill
What can i do today for him?

from his eyes black poison spills
How come he's still alive?
The clouds are raging over us
The doves and crows all went to hide

Oh my, oh my, what could i've done?
He's cursed alive, and cannot die
He wispers like he's frail and old
But to my eyes he is but a child

The thunder roars, the storm now starts
He's warm, he shivers, he's sick and warm
I'll chant a song, my mother sang
Untill he goes to sleep tonight

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A ver quiero saber si es aceptable en tipo un ingles antiguo o algo así, o si hay mala ortografía, soy medio noob en Inglés, igual gracias